Saturday, October 6, 2007

What should I write?


Lying on the bed 
In a hopeless condition
I thought about something to write 
Using my imagination
 
Should I write about
Some magical fairies or dwarves
Or tell people what 
Someone’s life was?
 
Should I make them
Roll with continuous laughter
Or make them cry 
As they left thereafter?
 
After some time
Of nonstop thinking
I wrote this poem

With my eyes blinking!!!

7 comments:

Anonymous

This was a really good poem. I am amazed at how fast you develop. Keep it up and you'll be better than me in no time (I already think you are, so, good job!).

Vinz

Meghna,

I was here in a jiffy just to surf a link forwarded to me by one of my friendship_made_in_orkut pal Binoy Kaladi, who, as i am informed, is your cousin brother.

Once i visited the site i found you to be very talented worth mentioning, true to his words which had already sketched your calibre and passion. You write good, considering the age you are into. The imagination spectrum possessed by you, young girl, is definitly commendable. Your vocabulary is very good, thanks to the wonderfull habit of reading.

As you had pinned down earlier in one of your initial write up, let me get you some brickbats too with all the above mentioned bouquets.. :-)

One thing you have to take care is the 'sentence formation'. You got to be more focussed on that part when you present it in public. It ought to be different from the usual scribbings in your diary. And in few areas your usage of words need some thought. Words are wonderfull creation which will have a meaning when standing alone and another meaning when joined with another one or in a sentence.

Anyways, nice going girl..A very good luck to you for you new venture. Keep writing...Keep reading..And do have fun..!!

Meghna

Hi Manictastic,
Thanks for those kind words. I believe that it's only due to everyone's help and support on this blog that I improve everyday! Oh no! your writing skills and your blog is much much better than mine!

Thanks once again.

Meghna

Hi Vinayak,
Thanks for visiting my blog and glad that you liked it! I will certainly endeavor my best to improve upon the points you have given me. Thanks very much for generous bouquets!

Keep visiting.....

Anonymous

Hi Meghna! Your posts are great, like this! Keep writing,...

Unknown

hii....cool poem....
:D
keep it up...
good luck...

Meghna

Hi Stephi and parnika,
Thanks for this supportive comment. I hope to entertain you further by writing some more of these poems!

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