My Brother
My brother is a genius
As smart as they come
Without the laptop though
He was really dumb!
The laptop was soon gone
By working on it for 24 hours
But my brother discovered
There was no life on Mars!
He became the same genius
All over again
But he could never remember our house
On 24 Park Lane!!
8 comments:
Hi Meghna,
A really humerous piece of poem. Short. Your description matches me??
Hi Peter Pie,
Sorry, I can't help it if my brothers description matches yours! (he..he). Anyways thanks for your wonderful comment and it feels great to hear that you enjoyed it.
Hi Meghna!
I haven't been commenting for a while be cause it wasn't working!
I loved your poem! Keep up the good work!
Is it really true though?
Stay in touch!
Bye! ;)
Hi Meghna, you're really talented for poetry! I enjoyed this one a lot! It reminded me of a friend! hihi. Take care!
;)
Hi I really like you piece of writing. Its funny. I am 13 years old and from New Zealand. You commented on my friends blog Christina. Could you comment on mine http://madscientistzwork.learnerblogs.org
whoooa!
dats all i can say!
d work is simply awesum meghu!
long way 2 go!
rawk awn..\m/
Dear Nadine,
Thanks for commenting and writing those kind words! Keep guessing if it's true!....
Dear Morrin and Aayushi,
Tanks for dropping by and writing your supporting words. Really happy that you enjoyed my little poem!
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