Thursday, September 6, 2007

Ants In The Pants!!!


Our picnic was ruined

By too many ants

At least I’m grateful

I didn’t have them in my pants!


I soon ran away from there

As I was scared the ants would bite me

But as soon as I ran

I was stung by a bee!


I howled in pain

Jumping & running all around

But I was too unlucky

Because some ants soon climbed into my pants!!!

13 comments:

Anonymous

Funny poem, didn't know they could be that. Another day, and an other lesson learned. Thanks.

Anonymous

hahah
thats hilarious
great poem
it made me smile :)
how are you?
thanks for commenting my blog.
take care
jess

Blogger Gabby

Cute little poem. Wishing you all the very best in this your maiden effort.

!!!Cheers!!!

Anonymous

Hey ,
my names sally you commented on my blog a little while ago your blogs really cool
some of your poems are really funny i couldnt write something funny to save my life
i love music What kind of music do you like?
Sally 12 australia

Anonymous

hey,
it's heather. you commented on blog. i luv yours its awesome, huge difference to my writing style though. hope to hear from you soon!
heather 12 austraila

Anonymous

Hey ,sally again
Have you been on my best mate Heathers blog Heather09.learnerblogs.org
shes a really good writter and a great mate
sally

Anonymous

Hey ,sally again
Have you been on my best mate Heathers blog Heather09.learnerblogs.org
shes a really good writter and a great mate
sally

Anonymous

Hi!
I'm Nadine from the Allstars! www.allstars.edublogs.org
Thats my class blog.
I passed by Naveen's blog and saw your comment so i visited!
My blog is at www.nadinel.learnerblogs.org
Please Please visit my class and blog!
ByeBye! :) :mrgreen:

Anonymous

Hi Meghna,
You've again come up with a humorous poem. Wonderful!

Peter Pie

Dear Meghna,
That was a beautiful hilarious piece of poetry you've created. Glad to know that you have made all of us laughing & laughing but sorry to know that your picnic was ruined.
Keep it up!

Meghna

Dear Manicastic, Catherine, Peter Pie and Blogger gabby,
Thanks for the complements! I'll try my best to keep writing such funny poems. Keep reading.........

Meghna

Dear Sally, Heather and Hutch,
Thnks for commenting on my blog!Glad that you liked it! Your blogs are great too! I will try to keep reading your posts! Hope you come back soon.......

Meghna

Dear Nadine,
Thanks for dropping by. I visited ur blog and found it very interesting. I've also posted a comment on ur blog.

Glad that u liked mine. Keep reading.......

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