Roses And Thorns!
On the thorny road of life
There are many twists and turns
Some left some right
Some dark or some white
Some are full of light
And contain peace and happiness
But some are really dark
Which start the bad phases in our lives!
Life is a long road
Which is delighting to tread
But don’t take it too lightly
Or soon you’ll be on the bed!
Take very cautious steps
So that your life is fun
Or you’ll end up in trouble
Along this long run!
24 comments:
Nice poem Meghna. Its short, sweat and lovely!
Great poem Meghna, its good to tread lightly through life, but sooner or later you'll have to take a risk. But still, its a great poem!
Great poem, Meghna!!
Hi Don,
Glad you liked it!
Hi Majik,
Thanks for this comment! I suppose you're correct. We do need to take a risk sooner or later!
Hi Nikita,
Thanks :D
I really like this poem. As you get older and life has it bumps and grinds, I wish you will still have light hearted poems.
Laughter and love is the key to life
The last line caught me; Take cautious steps so true!
Have a nice day :)
Nice one. By the way one question, when do u study? Merry Christmas. Take care
Very nice Meghna. You have a beautiful mind.
Hi Iriegal,
I believe that as i grow older i will remain the same happy little girl inside! I hope so! Hope I remember this poem at that age too!
Thanks for this visit and comment!
Hi Joel,
Glad you liked it! Have a nice day too!
Thanks.
Hi Nitin,
Glad you liked it! Answer to your question is that I stud when I', not blogging, writing or reading! My friends say that my mind is a bit sharper than otthers that's the reason that they beleive that I can understand and learn faster than them!
Than too, I come at the top position in my class! Lucky me!
Merry Christmas to you too but Christmas hasn't begun yet?
Hi Sandra,
Glad you liked it. Hope you liked my blog too along with my creativity!
Thanks!
this one is short and sweet, meghz :) and sprinkled with childish innocence too :)
Hi Anoop,
Life in the eyes of a small little girl, i suppose eh? Thanks!
Great job! You have a huge writing career ahead of you! Keep writing, Shelly
Hi Meghna,
Great Poem. I also like the dancing bugs bunny. You have added a lot of cool stuff to your blog. Happy 2008,
Elizabeth G.
Hi Shelly,
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the compliments!
Hi El,
It's been a long time since you last visited, I suppose. Since then I've added a great many things and changed the layout too!
Glad you liked my hard work!
Dear Meghna,
Your stories and poems are really meaningful.
U are a really talented friend of mine.{could make u my sister too!}
Ur friend
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HAPPY NEW YEAR ....2008
Hi Poetess,
I'd love to be a friend or sister of another talented kid blogger! Thanks for the compliment but I think you deserve them too!
Hi once again Poetess,
A very Happy and prosperous New Year to you too! :d
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