Poor Little Birdie!
Once a little bird
Fell from the air
Lying near my feet
It was a sight of despair
Seeing it’s poor condition
Pity dwelled in my heart
“Oh dear birdie, don’t worry
For you care, I’ll impart”
I took him gently
In my hands
And carried him over
To my Aunt Mands
Oh sweety, you’ve
Done a great job
I’m sure your Uncle
Would love it after I mob
I’m sure he’d say it’s good
You can come after a while
You and Uncle can eat it
After he comes from his walk of a mile!
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Hi Meghna! Really nice poem. Happy new year and keep writing :D!
Congratulations!
Nice poem, but your uncle can't eat that bird! Its my pet, Tweety Dee, who escaped from its cage and deliciously he be not! For the foulest of foul that would he be, so please - I beg of thee, just send him home to little old me and I, in return, shall be ever so pleased - oh so pleased I'd really would be. And to you dear child, oh, so. so grateful I'd be!
So send him back, oh pretty please, and I shall forever think warm of thee! But if not, my heart shall break and the very fouliest I would think of thee, so I trust in my heart that you be so kind to me and send me back my dear Tweety Dee!
It's nice to see intentionally amusing poetry every once in a while. Unlike unintentionally funny emo junk that floods the net.
Dear Meghna,
I've just read your poem, which you managed to contrive to be funny, sad, and quirky all at the same time! Well done again you.
Thank you very much for visiting my blog, and leaving your delightful comment. Praise from an extraordinary person is always extraordinary praise, and is to be valued highly, and so I do.
I hope you're enjoying your holidays.
S
:) Cool and funny poem Meghna
You are so creative.
Hi Stephie,
Thanks :D
nice one grlie...
Hi Don,
Can't believe you. You are far..far..better than me. I'll certainly send your bird back and not let my Uncle eat it! He's doing fine right now but...ah..no...Aunt is putting it above the fire. Poor he. But don't you worry I've put out the fire and saved him! He...he...
Thanks
Hi Bryce,
I'm glad you liked this sincere attempt. I agree. I too love reading funny poems on others blog rather than funny emo!
Hi Ess,
Thanks for all these compliments. you certainly deserve praise for your hard work which i do by leaving a comment. You're certainly an extraordinary person!
Hi qhoen,
Thanks! :D I'm not more creative than these pro-bloggers out here. Wish I was!
Hi neha,
Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comment!
brilliant twist..:D
Well done! Meghna! nice poem!! I really enjoyed it!
A very different poem. Just loved the twist and every word. Your doing just right with poems but need to work hard on stories. Keep it up and A Happy New Year.
Hi filarial,
Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked this poem.
Dear Nikita,
Glad that you had some enjoyment in reading this poem. Thanks for the comments.
Hi Nitin,
Thanks for the kind words. I am really happy that you liked this short poem. I am sure to put in more efforts for the stories. Keep reading. Thank you very much!
nice poem and nice twist, meghz...
Hi Anoop,
Glad you liked it!
Poor little birdie! A most unexpected ending! Keep writing Meghna!
Hi Petmon,
I'm glad you liked it! :D
that is a very good poem and the bird picture is the best one ive ever seen, Meghna
Hi arichthekid,
Thanks. I am glad that you liked it. Even happier that someone recognized my drawing talents too :D
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