Murder Mystery
As the police enquired, he had told them the truth but they didn’t believe him. They suspected Faolan of the murder as he was the only one with him. But Faolan knew it wasn’t him and he had to prove himself innocent to the Police, the family, the society and everyone else!
He then received a phone call which informed him that he would have to leave for
After his work at
But what attracted Faolan’s attention was his striking resemblance to his friend Graham. Faolan rubbed his eyes to see if he was dreaming but he wasn’t! It was true. Suddenly the man went out of the shop and Faolan paid the bill and hurriedly followed him. He reached a house with the name of Mr. Gabriel.
Faolan was dumbstruck. He decided to investigate the case. He tried to obtain Mr. Gabriel’s bio-data from the investigative agency and finally his hard work paid its fruit. He obtained the data and was surprised at what he read! He soon contacted the police who arrested Mr. Gabriel. He was given a lifetime jail!
The mystery was such that Mr. Gabriel was actually Mr. Graham’s identical twin. Graham had been in a financial crisis of late and asked his brother some money. Graham had refused and a cold-blooded war had started between them. Soon, Gabriel came to know that Graham had his will in Gabriel’s name but he was going to change it that day itself.
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16 comments:
Hi Meghna! Wow, great story! Keep writing... and congratulations!
Hi Meghna,
Notwithstanding that it's been a little while since I left a comment, I'm still following your progress my dear, as you go from strength to strength.
I still think you might do well to include a donation button on your blog, so your readers can donate directly to you.
You now have a large army of fans, many of whom would, I think, be only too happy to show their appreciation materially for the joy that you give out to the world.
You can easily get a donation button from paypal.com
Think about it.
Yours with continuing admiration,
S
Great story, you know I love to read Agatha Christy novels, I've read most of them...maybe next time you can start to write this kind of mystery short story in series! I'm sure lots of people will get courious for the next hints ;)
Hi Stephi,
Do keep reading too as I'll keep writing!
Thanks!
Hi Ess,
I'm glad to have you back (but I know you never went!). Thanks for this wonderful idea. I'll think about this and consult my parents. Thanks for you continued support!
Thanks for all the appreciation you've given me!
Hi Kukuh,
I too am an avid fan of Agatha Christie. She had written once in a lifetime mysteries! I'm glad to be compared to such a great person but I think right now, I've got miles to go! :D
Thanks!
Nice story,Meghna!Keep rocking,as always!:)
nice one, meghz. you could have made it a bit more elaborate. :)
Creativity blossoms in freedom and of all types for that matter.
Looks like you are really falling short of time and have cut the story short.
Even i feel the plot could have been developed more. The begining was good and caught attention.
Keep going.
you have been tagged meghna!check out my latest post
Hi Ranjhani,
Thanks for the compliment! You too rock!
Hi Anoop,
I could have elaborated it but then it would have become too long and boring, I suppose. So I purposely kept it short!
I'll try to do even better next time!
Hi Nitin,
Creativity certainly blossoms when free! I get your point but as I said before, i purposely kept it short because if i did elaborate it, it would have become too long! I would have had to split it up in two parts but I don't usually like that!
So I made it as short as possible.
Thanks for the comment! I'll keep it in m,ind the next time!
Hi once again Ranjhani,
Thanks for the tag. I'll do it soon!
nice! I write murder mysteries too..:D
Hi Rohit,
Glad you liked it! I liked your murder mysteries and blog too!
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