Desire To Soar High!
And fly incredibly high
I’d soar like a bird
With wings stretched
And have a wonderful time
Before I go to bed!
I’d love to touch the sun
And see if my fingers burn
Or if the smiling sun
Is really stern?
I want to touch the zenith
And walk on the rainbow
The bright colors of it
Will surely make my life glow
I want to see the castles
Found in the clouds
And I’d love to build one too
Among their lovely crowds
I want to meet the great Lord
Who lives up and above
And ask him to fulfill all my wishes
And spend my life amidst true love!
Oh How I’d love to see the sky
And fly incredibly high!!
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16 comments:
Hi meghna,
Your imagination soared really very high in this wonderful poem. I am sure that you will one day reach those heights in your life. There is no doubt looking at your talent at this young age. Keep writing!
meghz, you are already soaring. there is a english song by R Kelly - ' I believe I can fly' when i need to get myself pumped up, i remember this lines, that i believe I can fly. The soaring eagle is sure something which will boost up the mind. simple nice lines, and a very nice poem. two thumbs up for you, meghz...
Your imagination is quite good, & the pictures you have painted are really soothing for the reader's eyes.
A typical imagination & dream of a little child, flooded with poetic expressions & artistic touches, this is what sums up the poem. Great!
-Sam.
I am really elated to read this positive poem from you. Once again you have made everyone happy with the post. Keep it up.
Meghna, ...
So full of hope ...
It's a GOODie!
Dear Peter Pie,
It's good to read your comment once again! I'm happy you liked it!
Hi Anoop,
I haven't heard this song just yet but hope to do so soon! Thanks for telling me about it and the compliments!
Hi Sam,
I'm rejoicing after reading your comment! Happy that all of you liked it!
Thanks!
Hi Nitin,
Glad I could get a thumps up from you! It's really encouraged me!
Hi Monsooner,
Thanks for dropping by! I'm glad you liked this small piece of poetry!
Hi Meghna! Great poem and photo! Your mind is amazing! How could you write that? Wonderful poem!
Please, write a book with your poetry and stories! I'm sure you'll be famous if you do that.
Congratulations!
Splendid meghna! :)
really good! :)
Hi SStephi,
Thanks for the compliments and the idea. I'll try doing so when I grow a bit older, I suppose!
Dear Jeevy,
Thanks for the compliments. Keep reading!
Meghna,
Great poem, I'd becareful about touching the sun though, it's quite hot! You've got some really good imagery in this one! Two thumbs up!
Hi Majik,
I too would be a bit careful while doing so, I suppose! Thanks for the compliments and I'll keep posting better ones!
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