Life Is A Boon!
Life is something great and fun
But we always crave for a better one!
Everyone has his share of difficulties
But we should try to face them courageously
Life is a boon from Lord
So don’t go on the path you shouldn’t trod
Hope you understand how precious it is
Or it could be taken from you in a whiz!
Enjoy every moment of life
Especially times when you had to strife
But don’t you forget your values and manners
Because they are the ones which make you shine on banners!
Hope you learn a lesson from this poem
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Such a wonderful and inspirational poem from a young girl like you, it's magnificent! I love making poems too...
Thank you, guardian angel. I'm happy to know that you liked this poem. I would love to read some of your poems too!
This was just wonderful! Are you sure your only 12? You write like a person much more mature, even more than me. Wait, come to think of it, the cat is more mature than I!
Oh, by the way, I started my story for you that I'm writing, but it won't be for a week before I can get it finished.
I have to go to the hospital to help care for my mother (doing fine, thanks) and when I get home its so late, so, its really hard for me to find enough time.
I'm having fun with it, its all in my head, so hopefully, I will eventually get the time to get it out of there... as my brain is getting rather cluttered up lately!
In the meantime, keep writing and we will all keep reading. (if I don't freeze to death first.... I forgot how cold it gets here in Canada!)
Hi Meghna! Wow, what a great poem!
How could you write that??
Keep Writing and congrats!:D
A very sweet poem. I am equally amazed that someone who is all of 12 (and a little more now) can write so well. Quite a calling you have there...
You might want to check some grammatical mistakes in the poem, though! :-)
Hi I'm a lover of children's literatue,
Thank you for dropping by and leaving these comments. I'm eagerly waiting for the story you're writing :)
Dear Stephie,
Glad that you liked the poem. Keep reading! Thanks.
Hi eroteme,
Thank you for the really kind words. It was appreciable that you dropped by. About the mistakes, I'll try to avoid any in future and try to avoid any such.
Thanks again for your time & efforts.
yea - life is really a boon. the question is how many ppl really recognise it. I am glad that you are accepting the value of life - never run too fast that you dont have time to enjoy beauty of life - the ultimate aim of life is to live the life fully. good work, meghz.
I am not trying to pick up on anyone here but poetry did not have the right grammar.[I hope this sentence is right grammatically :-)]
just that be the way you want to be and soak the adulation. Soar but do also remember where the perfect landing pitch exists.
Take care
Hi Anonymous,
I'm glad you pointed out the mistakes along with the compliments! I think I can understand where I made the mistakes and I'm sincerely sorry for them! I know your expectations are high and so I'll try to maintain them!
Thanks for the corrections!
P.S- The next time you comment please leave your name too!
heyaa
u r a miracle..
a famous ryter disguised as mah frnd MEGHNA.. well u r oll de articles an poems wer fantastic..hope u ryte more an motivate de oders to do so...
Dear Suvaiba,
Thanks you for your kind words and keep visiting! I'm happy to have a friend like you!
Oh that was not intended to be anon. My name is nitin. I have decided to write with my nickname tintin to u. Hope u love the Tintin character/s.
Keep it up.
Hi Nitin,
Nice nickname. I too love the tintin charachters! By the way, do you have a blog too?
Hi Xh,
What you write is really true! Life is a boon!
Thanks for this motivating comment once again!
Meghna
I echo someone who has already mentioned that this one is inspirational.
You have developed great writing skills at a tender age.
Hi jesie,
Thank you for the kind words. I'm happy that you liked this little poem. Thanks!
That's a lovely poem!Keep it up :)
Thank you ,sameera. Glad that you liked this one!
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