The Shining Stars
The stars shining brightly
Millions and millions of them
Twinkling in the hazy sky
They look like a faraway gem
They are so lovely
Forming new things in the sky
Sometimes it’s a scorpion
Sometime a butterfly!
I just wish they were a bit nearer
That I could extend my hands and touch them
Feeling the tenderness and affection of their touch
And happiness in my life, they’d condemn!
I wish I could catch them
And decorate them in my home
These twinkling, shining little beauties
36 comments:
nys one...
well done! talented girl!!
The first part reminds me of my stay in a desert where we used to sleep under the sky, with literally millions of starts twinkling.
That was beautiful.
Hi neha,
Thanks!
Hi Meghna, great poem! You're very talented. Congratulations!!
I've posted chapter four of my story. If you can, visit it.
Great post!
nice girl, uve really got talent, we should make a collection and see if some will pay for it
Thanks for the twinkle Meghana :)
I could never write poetry..
Hi nikita,
Thanks :D
wow it really gud! r u suer u r just 12!!
u are very talented!
n thank you for droppin by!!:)
keep writing!
Hey Anand,
That must have been so awesome! Sleeping under the starry sky! WOW!
Thanks for sharing this with me and I'm glad you liked the poem :P
i cant stop wondering about you being so talented :)
great work, Meghna :)
Hi Stephie,
Thanks :D
I'll read chapter 4 soon!
Hi Dreamer,
Thanks :p
You've made me go blushing....I hope somebody does...but if they don't, I've lots of years ahead to look forward to :D
Hi priyank,
You are most welcome :p
I'm sure you can, if only you'll try!
Hi thoughts,
I loved reading your blog too. I'm or actually I was certain I'm young, but after so much questioning, I'm confused myself! :D
Hi Lena,
It's all due to the support of all my friends like you! Thanks :D
nice one, meghz.. really well done :)
Hi Meghna, glad to know that you liked my story! I'll be posting chapter 5 soon.
Bye!
hey megz
gr8 one dear
keep ryting
and yeah thanxx fr commenting
Hi Anoop,
Thanks Big Bro :P
Hi Stephie,
Your story is fabulous and keeps the reader glued and I love it! I'm waiting to read chapter 5 soon :D
Hi Subi,
Thanks dear and I'll keep commenting!
niceee!
good work Megz
found i from blog catalog :)
Hi there Meghna!
You are RIGHT! Once again. I am soo happy to have you participate in the riddles! Thanks.
And also, about your poem, i always look up to the stars and want to reach them and decorate them in my room too. They'd make it sparkle!!
Stars are just.. beautiful!
Do you write these amazing poems?
Simply beautiful, just like the star twinkling in the sky :) nice blog, and I like this template more.
"try for the moon at least u can reach for the moon"
twinkle,twinkle...blink...twinkle, twinkle....the light shines the brighest
Hi Nadine,
Yippee! I got it right again but after a lot of trouble to my brain :P
Thanks...I write these poems by myself and I wrote this one because I have always been fascinated by the little twinkling stars int he hazy night sky! I too would love to have them in my room!
Hi Veens,
Thanks :D
Hi Angelic,
Thanks for dropping by and I hope you liked the blog!
Hi Jeevan,
Just like the twinkling stuff called blogging and my blogger friends and all the happiness in my life :P
Glad you liked the blog and the template! Hope to see more of you around here :D
Hi Pratap,
He...he...I'll try for it the next time...but maybe I'm too short so won't you bring it down for me? :P
Hi Vishesh,
I agree....twinkle twinkle...blink blink...the light certainly shines the brightest! :P
In our contemporary world, there is so much light pollution that's it's often very difficult to see the stars clearly. But if you can get to somewhere far from the city, you notice that the sky is full of stars of all sizes and colors, and they seem close enough to touch. It's very beautiful.
Hi zencath,
The polluted city does not allow a clear vision of the faraway stars. But I do enjoy looking at them whenever I get time Villages provides a better view of them but I don't know if they seem near enough to touch! :D
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