The Indefinite Wait.....
But her eyes could adore no such beauty. They could only see one thing, which was the face of her son. Her husband had died of cancer when their son was only five years old. She would have killed herself because of the shock and trauma that there was no one left for her in this world. But she had lived…and a painful life too, just for her young child. The childlike innocence in his eyes, his naughty voice and his warm gentle hands, all had compelled her to live, never for herself but for her small darling.
She toiled from dawn to dust to educate her son and provided him with three square meals a day and good clothes, eating only a mouthful herself and moving around in rags in search for work. She provided him the best education possible protecting her son from all evils in her arms. Her son went to the best college, got a reputable job and settled down comfortably with a family of his own.
He bought a huge house where she lived too. But not as a mother anymore, she lived as a nurse or a maid without any respect or value. She cared for her grandchildren, looked after the house and did all the things possible in this old age. Her own child was unbearably harsh with her.
One bright autumn day, when she woke up, her room looked bizarrely bare. All her things had gone. She sat up in bed, when her son entered and told her that all her things had been packed and loaded in the truck. She battled her eyelids with surprise and a tinge of fear stung her deep inside. He pushed her into the car and informed the driver to take her to the old age home. In his last words, he informed his mother that his family was going on a holiday so they were sending her to the old age home, but they would be back soon to pick her up.
Her eyes glistened with tears as she wished to look at her Grandchildren for the last time and say good bye to her loved ones…but she looked on as she did everyday from then onwards.
She does not eat a morsel and goes without water for days, but sits in the derelict room staring out of the window with yearning eyes. In her mind, she knew they would never return but in the bottom of her heart she told herself that they would come. But now…now..it was too late. She kept looking out as her eyes slowly closed with tears glistening on her face as the dew drops outside, just as they did the day she had left them!
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28 comments:
why so much pain and angiush?
Have you read Shel Silverstein's The Giving Tree? It's a little young for you, but the sequence of sacrifices the tree(parent) makes builds to an affecting conclusion, open to interpretation.
It's always good to see how other writers handle the same storyline!
Hi Meghna! I just wanted to say that your posts are great. I love your stories and your poems. And thanks for the comment you left on my blog, I'll be posting chapter four soon.
Congrats!
such a thoughtful post. I love it.
Hi Filarial,
I don't know! It just came to my head and I wrote it.....
Hi Cheryl,
No, I have not read this book. As you have described it, I find it alluring and I will surely try to read it. Thanks for the suggestions :D
Hi Raaji,
Thanks :D
Hi Stephie,
Thanks for the complements! I'll be glad to read chapter four soon!
good construction, l'll sis. love the way u told the story. you are imporving with each story and poem you write :-D
Hi Meghna!
My own, sad tears of pain ran down my soft cheeks as i came to understand the lovely story.
I really enjoyed it, thanks for posting it and taking your time JUST for us to read and comment!!
I think her son was SO cruel and careless after all those years she cared for him, after her husband died, and gave him the best education, he just didn't care about her, threw her in the old age house and left her.
I think that he should feel sorry for what he done.
I love your stories, i agree with Stephie!
Do you actually write it yourself? Are you sure?It has GREAT description, you should enter a competition!!
Hey Meghna!
I think you should have a look at Naveen's blog at (www.naveen.learnerblogs.org) because she has a post about going to an Indian Church and learning Punjabi!
Do you know how to speak Punjabi?
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
You were right with the riddle, WELL DONE!!!
I really think you deserve it!!!
Hi meghna,
How cruel the son was!
U r a great storywriter!!
Check out my post on new section old friends!
At http://littlepoetess.blogspot.com
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Hi nadine,
I'm glad you liked the story, It is reality all around us that such things are happening and I'm really sad about it! Thus I wrote a story too. I write these stories myself and I'm thinking of entering some contests too! Thanks for the compliments :D
Hi andine,
I love reading naveen's blog too. I am sure to read this post! Unfortunately, I have not learnt punjabi yet :(
Hi Nadine,
Thanks a lot:) By the way, it was tough and finding the answer swept off my brain..LOL!
Hi Farha,
Glad you liked the story :D
Hi Anoop,
Thanks a lot Big Bro :)
hey, nice story dear. You built it very nicely and no doubt you are a great writer. Improve it further, you will become master. All the best.
Hi Jaggu,
Thanks a lot for the compliments! I will certainly try my best to improve myself furthermore and become a "master".
Thanks once again :D
hey megz
good goin
achchi story hia quite true humari m.sc assembly kuch relted thi ...shayad
maine ek naya blog banaya hia chek it out.. yaar
Hi Suvaiba,
Thanks :D But I do not find any similarity in that. It was three times different, I believe! I'll read it :D
This would be a great plot for a novel. You're a very socially aware writer and you nicely bridge between the hope for the future and the struggle to find a decent job with the sadness, betrayal and exploitation. I liked this one.
:O
:D
awesome!
Hi manic,
Getting a compliment from such a talented writer as you is very inspiring. You are an inspiration for me in itself and I'm glad to hear this. I'll continue writing better and try hard to improve! :P
Thanks a lot, Aayu! :P
good one..:)
Hi Pratap,
Thanks :P
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