The Waters
The glimmering silver sand
And the eternal sea shells;
I bend to pick them up
Yearning for everything, to immerse in my hand
They entrance me in their melodious songs
The sea-gull whistling by
With the waters drooling and swishing
I try to join, as my heart longs
The many years that flashed by
The never-ending cries
They all sound a distant dream
As the water, lashes by
Entrancing me with their tranquility
The waves strike the sand
Captivating parts of them with it
Sweep me off, amidst the rushing sea
The exorbitant beauty enticing me like they had never
I longed to see the sun set as the enormity spread
And the shadows envelop the entire earth
While I stand and wish it to be this way forever!
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:) nice ;) sea is just too lovely...we can write even when we have lost sight :)
:-) nice
@ Vishesh- True :)
@ Tedy- Thanks :)
Awww....you make me miss home girlie !!
I have grown up by the sea....
And that was a wonderful piece.
:)
Oh Meghna, you have done it again. I have never lived by the see, but through your poem I can say I have experienced it. Beautiful poem.
nice one :)
you are a talent....... :)
Hi Im Megan,
I live in N.Z
That is a really neat poem, you are really good.
You also have HEAPS of comments. If you have time please visit meganbe3.edublogs.org and maybe leave a comment?
Hey Meghna! I am in awe of your talent - truely. your site if fabulous! this piece The Waters really capture the seas moods. love it and looking forward to reading mor eof your things hugs Annie
now i know wt u meant when u said tht u never fail to notice the small things in natur :)
Beautiful...whn i was young n in school...actully i am still young so i will say when i was in school...lol...anyway, thni wrote a poem on similar lines, describin how i would love to run away from the chaos of the city and settle on the sea shore... I won then, but if u were in my class i wud have lost...lol
I still wanna retire to goa u know :)
@ Cindy di- Lucky!!! I only get to be there during vacations wishing for it to be there for eternity :)
@ Eric- I also have not visited the sea very often but the times that I have, they mesmerized me! Thanks a lot for those kind words :)
@ Sachin- :P
@ Megan- Your name;'s similar to mine LOL!
Thanks for the visit...I'm off to your place :)
@ Annie- Thanks a lot for those lovely complements! I'll certainly try my best to do so :)
@ Divi di- LOL! Miss youngster.....I would never have really won then! Do you still have it with you ???
wohaaaaaaaaaaaaa
u r surprising me everyday with ur talent gal..m proud of u...
I really liked the choice of words and richness of ur poetic skill's amazing display...
keep the spirits up like this always...
yeah i do...its on a paper...have saved it...its got creases n is breakin a lil but still with me :)
tagged :P
A very beautiful, moving poem.
cool
i'm a poet, but you are cool
how do you do this
my bro dosn't get 10 comments
and you; 20
gosh
you are cool meghna
i really miss Kerala!!! If i were there, i'd visit the beach once in a week!!!!!
@ Sorsuh Baiya- You are toh speaking as if you've read my poems for the first time LOL! Anyways, exalts at any time do me good with pink cheeks LOL!
Thanks :P
LOL! It's a damn real coincidence! We both are Keralites???? Whoa!
Athe karanam aanu ninaku malayali readers kittunathu!
(that's why u get malayalee readers)
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ys darling that Megh was you...tujhe abhi tak pata main tujhe Megh bulati hu....bada pyara lagta hai....
So here's letting you know officially...you're tagged...
Enchanting!...
@ Divi di- Good girl :P Would love to read it one day so don't let it break off!
@ Soursih Bhaiya- off to check it out :P
@ Cindy- Thanks a lot :P
@ Niranjan- Your brother and you are more talented :P
Thanks :)
@ Adi- Lucky!!!
@ Adi- True....birds of a feather flock together (oof....I say this so many times it looks as if this is the only;y saying I know :)
I don't think so....I even dont know how many malyalis read my blog LOL!
A real coincidence bro :)
wow... this is cool. Did you write it urself? If so, then you have major talent :-)
@ raji- LOL! All peioms and stories here are written by me!!! Thanks a lot :)
The sea is sucha beauty!
Pretty work! :)
And i haven't seen you on my blog since AGES.
Hi Meghna, what a great post! The sea is amazing...and nice.
Congratulations!
@ Aayu- Sorry dear....off I go :)
@ Aayu- Thanks yaar :)
@ Stephi- Thanks a lot :0
Very nice! I love the picture! :)
@ Anindita- LOL! Thanks :)
HapiBlogging to you my friend! Have a nice day!
@ Chester- Thanks :)
really good meghna.!!! keep iluminate & search new sky(sky of imaginations)
I read this, closed my eyes and felt that I was back at this beautiful beach just off Chennai. Sigh! Nostalgia...
Beautifullllllll verse!!!
I love the ocean!
@ mac- LOL! It wasn't that good you know :humble angel: LOL!
@ Salabham- Thanks a lot...yeah....I'll let my imaginations soar
@ Solitare- I loveeeee it so muchhhhh :)
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Delve into the Mind of A Budding Blogger’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
very lovely, dear!
you keep everyone surprised every time with your gift :)
@ ray- Thanks a lot for the information. I'll be looking into it and trying to join the fun, soon :)
@ Lena- LOL! Thanks a lot :)
Hi Meghna,
Once again, great post!
I've posted a new chapter of my story and something about my country, with photos. If you want, check them out! Hope you like it :)
Kisses, Stephie
@ Stephie- Sound great :)
Paying a visit soon!!!!
Lovely refreshing poem! :)
that was such a beautiful post. . .I am definitely going to the beach this weekend :D. . .You have got amazing talent :)
VP
that was really wonderful... u made wanna go take a long walk on some beach :)
@ Vandita- Khikhikhi....I hope you enjoy it :)
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