The Magical Adventures - 2
Reading your overwhelming response, to the previous part of this adventure, which can be read here.....I decided to post this as soon as possible! And hurray....I am done with it!
Et and I went inside the hall together. As I entered I actually realized it was not a hall but the principal city of the town. There were several shops scattered around in a haphazard way.
Like Et, there were several other Pocket Skyas (as their species is called). I realized the wrinkles here did not mean old age but were natural and attached with birth. The children stood near the parents while toddlers were carried in baskets.
It was a kind of huge bustling market which tempted me to take home a souvenir of this memorable place. But alas! I had no scopas (their currency) with me. Then again, Et came to my rescue. His stout fingers pointed towards the right and I read a blurry name reading Scopa Kanb.
"That is the Kanb (which is called bank on earth) where we store money. I am too wealthy and could happily give you some, Mistress!", he said with a cherishing smile. He bade me to wait where we stood while he took the money and came back in a jiffy.
With nothing to do, I started introspecting the intriguing ambiance. I saw hoards of Pocket Elves buzzing near one shoppe to another. The first shoppe that caught my eye was the Brainia Store. Here they sold human brains of dead people decorated artistically which I learnt the Elves used as home decorations.
I felt yucky and horrible at the thought of it but I was later informed that all humans who came to heaven happily donated their brains and those were decorating artifacts, as humans had no use of it now!
Then I saw another shoppe that said, "Comee Onee Commee All…To The Muckiiii Stallllll". Here the owner sold artistically adorned candles which captivated the viewer. I wondered why it was called mukckiii but later learnt that it was so because when the candle was burnt, it would burst into a huge ball of slickly, mucky liquid which was green and orange in color. This liquid would take strange and weird shapes which would momentarily disappear into the thin air! This, was given to young elves who used it to play pranks!
What mesmerized me the most was the Food Shoppe which sold various types of foamy liquids in a strange bowl. When Et returned, I first asked him to buy me a cup of Cloa-Cloa….the famous dish of Skysi World. As soon as I put it into my mouth, it kind of burst with a loud noise but there were no flames…instead, my mouth tickled it's taste buds with a strange flavor which melted soon but was most delighting. I ate five helpings of the dish but then Et told me that as a precaution to prevent obese elves, a sixth helping would explode the dish into flames…although dearly wanting to..I moved on.
Et smiled at me and lead me to Flora Stall. Here they sold strange purple and green and black flowers which were made of butterfly wings! It was the most pleasing sight I had ever seen. Thousands and thousands of butterfly-winged flowers all stacked together presented a scene that transfixed me.
Et bought me one in black with beautiful white spots and yellow markings. As soon as I held it in my hands and stared thrillingly stared at it for about a minute…the flower suddenly shriveled and the petals fell down on the flower. From these scattered petals emerged a volley of butterfly winged insects about the size of eagles. They circled me and bowed and flew away.
I asked Et what had happened, but instead of an answer I heard my mom calling and telling me that the school bus had already left. I grumbled and sat up at another shattered dream wondering why after all, had she woken me up when the bus had already left.
Then mom said, "Get ready grumpy heart. As you are late, Dad will leave you on the way to office." I ran to the bathroom and while brushing, my hand stumbled past something in my night dress's pocket. It was a Cloa-Cloa but the size of an ant now.............
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46 comments:
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Thanks LOL!
nicely written, i knew what will be the ending like
And now I understand the magical bed, as you said everyone has one
cute :)
Keshi.
Hey Meghna..
i must put my opinion in a simple word..Great!!! come wid more f such adventures Agatha christies, Tintin and Mr Holmes..well tell me abt ur templates..i too want one f dem..can u help me..
Tomz
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Well imagined and well written. I loved the part about the brains. We don't need them in heaven! :D
Keep your creativity flowing, I'd love to read more! P:
If I may suggest, try not to fall into the ellipsis (...) habit. Many people do, and not only does it act as a barrier to your creativity (sentence construction is an art in itself, you'd agree), the reader gathers it as a pause, as if it's a verbal exchange rather than a written one.
P.S. I must say, great job you have done with your blogs. It's indeed a tough job to maintain a single blog, you're managing two! Kudos!
Hi Anand,
Hope you discover the magic soon enough!
Thanks :P How did you guess?
Hi tomz,
Thanks for the kind words.....you can find these templates at any other free template sites
Hi Alok,
Thanks a lot for the suggestions. I will certainly keep that in mind. I think I've got into this serious addiction of going into eclipses because It hink they are suitable pauses. Earlier I used to embrace eaclamation marks! LOL!
I will keep that in mind for the forthcoming poss. Thanks a lot once again...and even for the kind words!!
Eeekss...I used it twice in this small reply itself! Ahh!!
Hi Keshi,
Thanks :)
When I was a kid, I used to read a lot of comic books. there was a character called 'pinky'. In one of her comics, she sees a dream where she has got a Jeanie and she stop doing anything. Result, spiders make a web on her legs :). Then here mother wakes her up asking "Pinky, school nahi jana kya?"
I don't know why but reading first part of your story reminded me of that.
wowwwwwwwww sissy... grt story..thoroughly enjoyed it. u hv superb imagination power n grt writting skills. kp writting. m sure very soon u will be a big and famous name in d writing arcade..
all d best my sweet sis.
take care
:):):)
Hi Anand,
Pinky....haven't read any of her comics I believe....maybe some childhood memories swirling back into head!
Hi lata di,
Glad you liked it! I like writing them too.....with all your good wishes,I am trying hard LOL!
Thanks a lot...
:) cute
Nice post........
Hi sachin,
Thanks bro :)
Aapne kaha aur hum chale aaye :P
Lol!
I know..we are the same by our behavious,but are writing patterns are completely diff.
I liked this though!! :D
Really very much,awesome imagination! :)
Good work,buddy
(kuch zyada tareef nahi ho gyi? :D)
Hi aayu,
Thanks a lot dear!! I agree...no ...no...no problem....jitni tareef karni hai kar lo LOL!
What a coincidence...I was also remined of Pinky while reading this
***Here they sold human brains of dead people decorated artistically which I learnt the Elves used as home decorations.
Loved the line!!!
You know, i think even here on earth, brain is really a decorative piece for humans. Flaunt it and show off all your intellect even if you don have one.
Next time when u meet the elves, ask em if some of those decoractive brains are actually of livin human beings cuz nowdays it seems like the ones on earth are also missing em...LOL
You have been blogrolled and you are my youngest blogger link...so keep bloggin and enjoy!!!
How do you get such ideas girl?Keep it up! :)
Hi Meghna! Thanks for the comment, the next chapter is about the homecoming party :)
Wow, I loved this post! Your stories are always great! This one is very good written, as the others!
Congratulations!
Hi Divi di,
Hey....who is this Pinky now??? :X
Nice thought......really nice....flaunt it and show your intellect even if you don't have one :P
Hi Sam,
I don't know but they just keep pouring in :)
Hi Stephie,
Thanks a lot dear.....waiting for the third chapter to come :)
Hey Meghna
You took me on such a wonderful adventure with this story!! First I though ET was going to be bad, but soon I learnt not! What a dream and a story, wish I could have been there and wish I could have those amazing dreams of yours too. You fascinate me, your writing is fantastic and phenomenal. You have done a great job!! Good on you. I am lucky to have you as a friend because of your astounding writing skills. Now we are even!!
Nicely written, I agree with Anand. How cool that was.. also to find he mini dessert in your pocket. Good one! If I would have had those dreams of yours, I wouldn't have to blink once at night. I will find that bed, the magical one one day!! ;)
P.S Keep visiting for more stories and posts!
Hugs & Kisses
Nadine
good one :)
Thanks for visiting my space. Liked your blog too!! Blogrolled ya!!
Hi Nadine,
That's exactly the problem with me....I always get late to school....but who'll explain the reason to the teachers???
Thanks a lot dear :)
Hi Karthik,
Thanks a lot bro :P
Hi IWA,
Thanks a lot...Loved your place too :)
:-) beautiful again, Meghna! Especially, I kinda liked the way you named things :-) Do I see the J.K. Rowling of tomorrow? :-)
Btw, don't worry about the ellipsis... ;-) there are no hard and fast rules in literature, especially when you are venting your passion out. Now, even if there are any, let those rules scream... we'll transgress, and create our own world of literature :-))
There are readers of all tastes... you write the way you like, and that in itself might create a new paradigm tomorrow! Keep writing, and be true to your own style :-)
Waiting for the next!
Where art the promised-to-be-with-me-by-tomorrow
photographs Meghz? :X
Did my comment not turn up here yesterday? :(
Anway, what I was saying was, your writing takes me back to the magical world I used to go to when I used to read Enid Blyton.
Very Nice!!
Ah such a magical imagination, and the ability to share it with us all. I love your stories, and how you let the character bring a piece of the dream home, "It was the Cloa Cloa but the size of an ant now". Don't you hate how a good dream must always be interrupted by the coming of the morning.
Keep up the good work, and keep on decorating your brain with a good education, but always share it.
Hi Arian,
It feels so good to hear that. I will certainly maintain my style and passion with or without eclipses! It's just that the reader provides suggestion and I try to implement them. But as you say, it motivates me not to forget myself amidst his havoc......This comment reminded me of myself....Thanks a lot :P
eeekkkkss Aayu,
This muddle-head forgot again :P
Try to send them soon!
Hi Taurius,
Blogger is having a bit of problems so I suppose not....Thanks a lot....it is an honor to read her name with mine :)
Hi Eric,
yes I hate it and feel like sleeping the whole day but then.....my parents friends and teachers hate that and how to make them understand, you know!
I will certainly abide by that nobe thought :P
Hi Meghna...you are soooooo sweet! I love your writing!! I would love to be one of the FIRST to get hold of your FIRST published book!! WHEN is that going to be!!! I want it this coming Christmas!! so...off you go!! and ...no back chat!! I'm waiting!! I won't add a smiley here...as I'm very serious...look at my face!! It's straight and serious!
haha... pretty it was enjoyable landing on ur magical world, esp. yours shopping in skysi world! Loved the idea... and cloa...cloa... ;)
Hey, just browsed around to see your page.I admit,I have never been to any pade as decorated as this.Nice template.As for the other blog- have just read 2 books in the 23 years of my life- what can I say :). Pleasure to have you around.
Hi Niks,
Thanks a lot :0
OOkay...okay....I'm off to work! I'll certainly try to do so by the end of two or three years but certainly cannot promise this christmas!
I know....you are chuckling but why aren't you smiling! LOL!
Hi Jee,
Thanks....I'll ask my magic bed to visit you next and then off you go to Et....hope you get more new things but certainly remember the cloa-cloa LOL!
Hi Mishra,
Wow! Those two books must be honored LOL!
I'm glad to have you around too....decorated, eh? Thanks :p
that was so sweet... u write amazing well!
'twas a pleasure readin
@ Vandita,
Thanks a lot dearie :)
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