A Pretty Angel!
When I’m lonely, when I’m distressed
When I don’t understand
What life is and what it means
An angel comes from above and holds my hand
She consoles me and enlightens me
Making me understand what life is
She lays her warm hands over me
Her love is something I can’t miss
This pretty angel is the light of my life
And the gem of my heart
She is none other than my benevolent mother
Someone with whom I can never part!
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20 comments:
all moms are pretty :)
good one.
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Hi Nothingman,
All moms are as pretty as an angel! Thanks :D
Very touching poem ;)
Beautiful poem!
Sweet poem!
Hi Mark,
Thanks! :D
Hi Don,
It's always nice to get compliments from you! Thanks :D
Hey Nikita,
Thanks :D
sweet one and so beautifully written!!
Great work, Meghna! :)
nice poem meghna,
very good english vocabulary
love,
poetess
A wonderful poem. Moms are beautiful.
This is great!
A good poem
Hi Lena,
Thank you so much!
Hi poetess,
Thanks for the compliments:D
Hi Clare,
Thanks. Moms are really wonderful!
Dear leena,
Thanks :D
Hey Nitin,
Thank you very much! :D
Meghna,
That was a nice poem, simple and light. Keep up with your poetry, write and re-write. The poem is skimming the surface and over time you will be able to dig deeper.
I wrote a poem for my mom a couple of years back. It was hard but meant a lot to her and to my family.
Some of my poems have taken a year or more to complete and even then I'm never sure if the wording is done. Keep the ink wet and enjoy the words. :)
Hi Terry,
Thanks for the advice. I don't anyhow take more than an hour to write a poem, and this is the outcome. but your must have been fabulous! People (great poets) like you are rare.
Sure try writing better next time!
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