Wednesday, April 16, 2008

So Close, But So Far ....




She sat there…..tears rolling down uncontrollably from her eyes….She stared unbelievably at the picture which was now moist from her tears……she just couldn’t believe it…..she….she….she…she who had done everything for her parents….she who had loved them like no one else…she who had cared for them all her life….what else could she think when they told her she was adopted?

Riya returned home happily that evening after giving her last paper. She had always topped through her college years, and this being the last one, she was determined to work hard and pass out with flying colors!

But then life changed in an instant when she unintentionally eavesdropped on her parents and learnt the truth. She cried when she heard it and went storming into the room and demanded to know the whole truth. With eyes down, not able to face her fiery red ones, her parents told her that their real daughter died in a plane crash when she was very young. They adopted her then, and also told her that she had an elder sister who had already been taken away……

Not being able to swallow the bitter truth, she went to her room….her moist eyes gazing at the family albums for one last time. She packed one in her bag, where she stood happily with her mom and dad, swallowing a lump in the throat when she looked a it!

She left home without a word that day by train. She went to another city, to another place, to a new destination where life would not cheat her. She got a room for rent which was shared by another girl called Mariah. She was elder than her and was finding a job in town. Both of them never talked about their past but created a certain bond of friendship…they talked day and night, helped each other and solved each other’s problem! Riya had found one person she could trust.

Mariah noticed a small necklace in Riya’s neck and with a strange twinkle in her eyes, she asked, “Hey, that’s a beauty dear….where did you buy it from?”

“Ah! I don’t remember how I got this but I could show you lot many better than this!” Riya cried happily and started showing her jewelry collection to Mariah.

Then Mariah left for her interview while Riya stayed back, preparing for her exams. Around 2 in the afternoon she called an urgent call from an unknown person, who informed her that Mariah had a terrible car accident and was in hospital. He gave her the address and room number and asked her to visit soon as Mariah’s condition was critical and she could be breathing her last.

With no time to ponder over the news, Riya left impulsiveness and reached Mariah’s room soon. She stared at the drastic change in her….how the fun loving Mariah who always had a smile on her face, was lying there as if there was no life in her….though a faint gleam was visible in her eyes…

Riya went and sat beside her, clutching her hands tightly but not shedding a single tear….she looked bravely at Mariah…

With faint gasps, Mariah said, “I’m glad you came…I realized something today and I want to reveal the truth to you now… We both are the sisters who had parted at birth….” She then took off a necklace form her neck and Riya took of her own. She put them together and understood that they were broken pieces of a single sign which when fixed together, formed a heart….Riya took out her childhood photo from her bag and noticed that she had this piece of jewel even then!

With uncertain feelings in her heart Riya stared at Mariah’s silent face….her eyes ere closed and she had already breathed her last….Riya stared…sobbing uncontrollable and kissing Mariah’s hand lightly, she said, “Oh Lord, why has life always been so dishonest, deceitful and such a hypocrite with me….?”

Her tears glistened in the soft sunlight as she tightly clutched the piece of dazzling, elegant jewel and cried her heart out….


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65 comments:

Occasional Brilliance

that was so beautifully written... i could see it playing out in front of me and so badly wanted to reach out to riya...

Lena

it is almost like a fairy-tale... but very well written, Meghna! Like you always do :)
it is always a pleasure to read your stories or poems!

Kelvy

well written as always... :)

--xh--

well written, but a l'll bolywoodish. :)

Anonymous

that was an interesting read!

Meghna

Hi Bubbles,
I'm glad you liked it....I wish we all could help Riya!

Meghna

Hi Lena,
Thank you so much for the compliments! And it's always a pleasure to hear from you :P

Meghna

Hi Enigma,
Thanks :P

Meghna

Hi Anoop,
he...he....Bollywood connection from where?

Meghna

Hi Vishesh,
I'm glad I could make it interesting :D

anand

nicely done, infact you are getting better with every post

m.flowerr

superb narration.......i love your way of writing!

Cinderella

Megh ! I read your comment on 'Neanderthal..'.
Thanxz so much girl. I cant believe you realy made your frens read my blog..and helped them know about it.
You made my day sweety.
And like I have said earlier in that post, I wish more youngsters thought like you.

Muaah baby !

Cinderella

And about this story...I liked it, though honestly I felt you kinda rushed everything very fast.
Was that a limitation ou wanted to keep ?!
Story-telling needs tactics actually, more than just good words, and a nice concept. You can have the same effect in a few or more words. tactics is the key.
And this was a nice attmept.
Looking forward for more.

Anonymous

Hi Megna...excellent writing... always nice coming here and read your fantastic writing...you've got a wonderful imagination!! sorry for not popping in the last week or more...was having this horrible flu/cold...still a bit unwell, but much better! enjoy the rest of the week!

Meghna

Hi Anand,
Thank you so much for the encouragement :P

Meghna

Hi Flower,
Thanks a lot :D

Meghna

Hi Cinderella,
It was pleasure to help you and my friends...I'm thankful to you too :D

Meghna

Hi Cinderella,
I attempt to keep my stories short although the concept I have in mind is a bit too long which can tire the reader....maybe! I cut them short to keep the interest of the readers alive! I'm really trying hard to develop those story writing tactics and do better next time...Thanks :D

Meghna

Hi Nikita,
Hope you are doing well now! Thanks for dropping by once again and appreciating my work :P

Anonymous

Hi Meghna,
That was a touching story very well written. I like the concept of short and simple yet interesting.

Meghna

Hi zunnur,
Glad you liked the story and concept...Thanks for the compliments :P

Stephie

Hi Meghna, this is a very nice post. Your stories are always great!
I've already posted chapter 7 from my story, if you can, please visit it!
Congratulations!

Jaggu

You write nice stories. Believe me.

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥

it was wonderful..bit like a bollywood flick :P..but guess wat ..i love bollywood flicks...

grt..

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥

cindy auntie k suggestions mat sunna :P

Jaggu

You are tagged. Check out my "10 reasons why I blog" tag

Meghna

Hi Stephi,
Thanks :p
I'll be visiting soon!

Meghna

Hi Jaggu,
Thanks a lot!

Meghna

Hi Sourish,
Hey....Can't understand the bollywood connection you people see but I'm glad you liked it! Thanks :D

Meghna

Hi Dreamer,
He...he...But got to take them up seriously na, if I want to improve :P

Meghna

Hi ajggu,
Thanks for the tag...I hope to do it soon :P

gypsy

nys one...

Vineet Rajan

accha lagta hai, tumhaara blog padke! :)

Meghna

Thank you, d sinner!

Meghna

Hi vinni,
You are welcome :P

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥

bollywood connection..
ladka adopted ..achanak ek ladka adhi film mein aa gya..wohi ek gana gaane laga..jo uski ma ne sunaya tha kabhi...
dekhi nhi aisi muvees???

aur bhi hai...locket milane wala scene bhi tha...
lol
tum bolywood rehne do..mujhe bahut hasi aa rahi hai...:P

aur cindy se jyada na seekho :P wo tumhe bhi apni tarah mujhe confuse karne wala writer bana degi ;)).. fir mujhe do do blog par confuse rehna padega ....
lol

Ranjani Ravi

You never fail to amaze me with your words, Meghna!Keep the great work going!Kudos!

LoUraiNe

hi dropping by.. take care

Anonymous

Beautiful Meghna!
Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful!!! :)
I cried my eyes till they turned fiery red of ruby. You amaze me Meghna!
Please keep writing those stories of yours!
I would hate to be adopted, find out a sister that was separated from me from birth. But I wish Mariah hadn't died! :cry:
Yours Truly

Rahul Mathur

Wow Meghna That was impressive !
Amazing writing skills u got ! Keep rocking !

p.s.- chk my blog sometime ;]

Sameera Ansari

Ooh that was so touching!Life can be so unfair at times...

Very well-written! :)

Meghna

Hi Sourish,
I suppose that such movies must have been made years back when I wasn't even born lie Karan Arjun, eh??
I've not really seen such movies as the kind of movies I see is Dhoom, Krisshh, Chak De.....and the new age movies :P
Cindy (aunty...as u ask me to call her!) is a great writer and so are you....I know I may get confused but in the end it would be benenfiical, na?
And hey.....I would love to see you pulling your hairs off if you read my confusing blogs :D

Meghna

Hi Ranjani,
Thanks you so much fort eh compliments! It's great to hear from you :p

Meghna

Hi Lourane,
Thanks :p

Meghna

Hi Nadine,
Oh dear, I feel a little bad to have you cry like that...A smile looks good on your face :p
Nevertheless, I'm obliged you feel so! No one would have ever like going through what Mariah went!

Meghna

Hi Rahul,
Thanks for dropping by and thanks for the compliments too....Will be visiting soon :p

Meghna

Hi Sameera,
Glad you liked it...Life is certainly abject at times...but that's the truth! Thanks :p

Jeevan

It is unbelievable, but I have to believe this is a true writing. Very creative meghna!! It was great reading a sensitive story and the scenes are visible imaginative.

Meghna

Hi Jeevan,
I've always been encouraged to do better after reading your comments! Thanks a lot :P

Anonymous

Hi Meghna!
That was MEAUTIFUL! The story touched me and I loved it! It was beautifully written, with an author's hand. HOPE YOU BE ONE!
LOVELY, KEEP IT UP!
I'm looking forward to reading more of your lovely stories!
And thanks fro your comment, my favourite colours are Hot Pink and red!
Bye!

Anonymous

Wow! The story was powerful...that is a credit to your writing talent! But, I must admit, it broke my heart that the premise was that the only relationships that matter are those that are tied together by blood. I am an adoptive mother and the bond in my heart to my children could be no deeper and nore more real had they been born to me. It is hard for me to comprehend why it matters whether the heroine was born to her parents or adopted by them, if they loved her and she loved them. Love runs deeper than blood.

Meghna

Hi Rola,
Thanks a lot for that wonderful comment! It surely made my day :P
I love those colors too!

Meghna

Hi Monica,
I'm sorry that it hurt your sentiments but this was meant just as a story...Certainly, love runs deeper than blood :)

Anonymous

That was a pretty lousy attempt at a short story. It lacked everything. There is no character, no depth, no description, no plot, no nothing. Bland and a waste of time reading. Sorry to be this harsh, but there are times when one has to go beyond the regular applauders and try to improve one self. I hope you take this feedback in the right spirit and improve on your talent.
- Pooja

Meghna

Hi Pooja,
I'm so glad you thought that and told me so! I know it is to improve my writing so I'm thankful actually :P
I myself think this was one of my weakest but I do dope you enjoyed the other stories and found (at least 1) some good ones too!
Thanks a lot once again and I'll try hard to improve :)

Anonymous

Hi meghna this is a old story but very nicely written. I could see the whole thing happening before me.
I'm amazed by your writing skills at this age. Keep up the good work and keep rocking.

Meghna

Hi satish,

Thank you for the great complements you've given me. It is with the help of encouragement of readers that I try to improve upon my writing.

Keep visiting. Thanks!

Anonymous

definitley dear,
I already subscribed to your feed. For now i will not miss any post frm you :)

Meghna

Hi satish again,
That was a really kind gesture. Thanks!! So, I'm sure I've one more reader who doesn't want to miss my writings....

Anonymous

hi sis
you should have a .com domain for your blog. Deicde on the doamin name. if you want i can buy it for you as a gift.

Meghna

Hi satish,

It is so nice of you to give me suggestion and even saying about gifting domain. Thanks for that.

But can you please tell me how to proceed about if I plan to change to self domain. What are the things to be done and how much it may cost etc. so that I can talk to my dad for taking a decision. That will be very useful. So, if you can, please let me know.

Thank you once again!

Anonymous

Hi dear,
You have two options,
you can use blogspot for hosting and add a .com domain for it.
or
Buy your own hosting service and use wordpress to power your blog, You can import all your posts and comments from blogspot to worpdress easily.wordpress has a huge community and lots of themes to choose from.

usually a .com domain costs at max 400rs you can get hosting and doamin for 1000rs

One disadvantage with going for a new doamin name is you will loose all you back links and search engine traffic. if you blog for improving your writing skills then you shouldnt be worried about this.

Meghna

Hi satish,

You're so kind in providing timely help and yeah, thanks!

Though I'm blogging for writing skills, I've already gained lots of backlinks too. So, options given are worth thinking thoroughly. Let me ponder...

By the way, can you give me where to get more details (website address etc) so that I know where to contact, if i'm not disturbing you much?

Thank you for the help, bro :))))

Anonymous

Hi Sis
can you give your im id over here, i use yahoo and gmail
http://geniushackers.com/blog/contact-me/

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