Saturday, March 29, 2008

The Shining Stars


The stars shining brightly

Millions and millions of them

Twinkling in the hazy sky

They look like a faraway gem


They are so lovely

Forming new things in the sky

Sometimes it’s a scorpion

Sometime a butterfly!


I just wish they were a bit nearer

That I could extend my hands and touch them

Feeling the tenderness and affection of their touch

And happiness in my life, they’d condemn!


I wish I could catch them

And decorate them in my home

These twinkling, shining little beauties

Would lay embedded in my heart’s dome!

36 comments:

gypsy

nys one...

Anonymous

well done! talented girl!!

anand

The first part reminds me of my stay in a desert where we used to sleep under the sky, with literally millions of starts twinkling.

That was beautiful.

Meghna

Hi neha,
Thanks!

Stephie

Hi Meghna, great poem! You're very talented. Congratulations!!
I've posted chapter four of my story. If you can, visit it.
Great post!

vagabond dreamer

nice girl, uve really got talent, we should make a collection and see if some will pay for it

Anonymous

Thanks for the twinkle Meghana :)
I could never write poetry..

Meghna

Hi nikita,
Thanks :D

MY THOUGHTS!!

wow it really gud! r u suer u r just 12!!

u are very talented!

n thank you for droppin by!!:)

keep writing!

Meghna

Hey Anand,
That must have been so awesome! Sleeping under the starry sky! WOW!
Thanks for sharing this with me and I'm glad you liked the poem :P

Lena

i cant stop wondering about you being so talented :)
great work, Meghna :)

Meghna

Hi Stephie,
Thanks :D
I'll read chapter 4 soon!

Meghna

Hi Dreamer,
Thanks :p
You've made me go blushing....I hope somebody does...but if they don't, I've lots of years ahead to look forward to :D

Meghna

Hi priyank,
You are most welcome :p
I'm sure you can, if only you'll try!

Meghna

Hi thoughts,
I loved reading your blog too. I'm or actually I was certain I'm young, but after so much questioning, I'm confused myself! :D

Meghna

Hi Lena,
It's all due to the support of all my friends like you! Thanks :D

--xh--

nice one, meghz.. really well done :)

Stephie

Hi Meghna, glad to know that you liked my story! I'll be posting chapter 5 soon.
Bye!

suvaiba

hey megz
gr8 one dear
keep ryting
and yeah thanxx fr commenting

Meghna

Hi Anoop,
Thanks Big Bro :P

Meghna

Hi Stephie,
Your story is fabulous and keeps the reader glued and I love it! I'm waiting to read chapter 5 soon :D

Meghna

Hi Subi,
Thanks dear and I'll keep commenting!

Anonymous

niceee!

good work Megz

NaTzAnGeLiK

found i from blog catalog :)

Anonymous

Hi there Meghna!
You are RIGHT! Once again. I am soo happy to have you participate in the riddles! Thanks.
And also, about your poem, i always look up to the stars and want to reach them and decorate them in my room too. They'd make it sparkle!!
Stars are just.. beautiful!
Do you write these amazing poems?

Jeevan

Simply beautiful, just like the star twinkling in the sky :) nice blog, and I like this template more.

broca's area

"try for the moon at least u can reach for the moon"

Vishesh

twinkle,twinkle...blink...twinkle, twinkle....the light shines the brighest

Meghna

Hi Nadine,
Yippee! I got it right again but after a lot of trouble to my brain :P
Thanks...I write these poems by myself and I wrote this one because I have always been fascinated by the little twinkling stars int he hazy night sky! I too would love to have them in my room!

Meghna

Hi Veens,
Thanks :D

Meghna

Hi Angelic,
Thanks for dropping by and I hope you liked the blog!

Meghna

Hi Jeevan,
Just like the twinkling stuff called blogging and my blogger friends and all the happiness in my life :P
Glad you liked the blog and the template! Hope to see more of you around here :D

Meghna

Hi Pratap,
He...he...I'll try for it the next time...but maybe I'm too short so won't you bring it down for me? :P

Meghna

Hi Vishesh,
I agree....twinkle twinkle...blink blink...the light certainly shines the brightest! :P

Anonymous

In our contemporary world, there is so much light pollution that's it's often very difficult to see the stars clearly. But if you can get to somewhere far from the city, you notice that the sky is full of stars of all sizes and colors, and they seem close enough to touch. It's very beautiful.

Meghna

Hi zencath,
The polluted city does not allow a clear vision of the faraway stars. But I do enjoy looking at them whenever I get time Villages provides a better view of them but I don't know if they seem near enough to touch! :D

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