Sunday, December 30, 2007

Determined To Live!

“Congratulations Mr. Zach Herney”, said the stern yet joyful voice of his new boss, “You’ve been selected for this job!” Zach couldn’t believe his ears. Hurray! He’d been selected in his first interview itself for this well-paid job. His excitement and happiness knew no bounds! At last, his hard work had paid its fruit. Zach, a twenty-three year old struggling graduate from a poor family had given the interview for this job and had been selected out of two thousand deserving candidates.

But when he was happily returning home to convey the good news, he experienced a severe head-ache. His head started turning and it felt as if the whole world was going around him in a long circle. Suddenly, his eyes closed and he fell motionless on the ground. His friends picked him up and admitted him to the hospital.

Tears of frustration dwelled in his eyes and poured down continuously. “Only 48 hours? Is that it?” he asked his irate self. Zach had been having severe head-ache and bouts of weakness since the last few days. But when he had fainted on the road returning to tell his family the good news, he had been admitted to the hospital. The doctor told him to return the next day for further tests but Zach sensed a bit of disappointment in his voice.

Well dressed and a bit scared yet enthusiastic he went to the hospital for his check-ups. When the doctor told him the results of these painful tests, he felt his enthusiasm ebbing away and anger taking its place. The doctor had told him that he had a brain tumour which was on its serious stage. In a reassuring tone he averred, “I’ll put my best physicians on your case. But you just finish all the work you have and get admitted to the hospital in 48 hours.”

He couldn’t believe his ears. “Why me out of these billion people on Earth?”, he asked the great Lord. He had got so much to do ……. join his new job the next week, support his widowed mother and look after his younger brother’s further education. How could he do it all in 48 hours?

He quietly went home and lay on his bed wondering how to break this news to his family. He was determined not to die. How could he? “No…no..no..have confidence in the great Lord…I won’t die”, he told himself. He then quietly told this bad news to his supportive family and they all wept in unison.

His family thoroughly supported him through this bad phase in his life. He admitted himself to the hospital the next day with his mom at his bedside, day and night. The doctors worked hard but there was only slight possibility of life. A few days later, the doctors were called hurriedly to Zach’s room. The patient had crept into coma!

The doctors were now certain that there was no chance but …death. Nevertheless they worked hard. After an hour’s operation, all was left to God’s mercy. The doctors had now surrendered. But they were taken aback by a strange miracle in the next few hours. Everyone heard Zach’s low breathing which developed with every passing moment. He had survived!

Doctors then told his family that it was only Zach’s mere determination to live, to support his family that had him in good health today! If it had been something medically, he wouldn’t have been alive today.

I’m inspired to write this story from a friend who had experienced similar fate. Now I think Zach is doing well with a good job in hand and supporting his family. His family must be proud to have someone like him!

I’m sending this story for the Manicastic Short Story Award on Manicastic’s Blog. The prize is a funky looking banner-thingy to put on my blog. I hope you all can see that banner on my blog soon!

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26 comments:

Nikita

Great story! Developed into a sad story, but then a happy ending! Well done! And there are surely still thousands of miracles happening throughout the world today, we are just unaware of them!! God is powerful and mighty, only if more people can trust Him and believe in Him!

Nikita

Forgot to say, Meghna, i do believe we will see that banner!! Good luck! AND...a VERY Happy New Year to you!! Keep blogging such fantastic stories and poems in 2008!

Meghna

Hi Nikita,
I'm glad you liked the story and that you too believe in the power of the Great Lord!

Keep in touch!

Meghna

Hi Nikita,
I too hope I win the contest. A very very happy New Year to you too! :D

Anonymous

One of the best I ever read Megh. Can't wait to see that banner Sis.

Good Luck
Susanno

gypsy

:D wishin that u get it n yea, readin ur space, i end up feelin J, u got loads of talent grlie...so keep scribblin!!!!

got me hooked!

Peter Pie

Hi Meghna,
A wonderful short story again by you!!

I am sure she deserve to win this award!

iriegal

It is a wonderful story. I love it. The world needs something to believe in.

Leena Helttula

A very touching story!
I admire your ability to choose the words. May I have your autograph when you will be a famous writer?
Good luck with the award! I really hope you get it

Ms. Scorpia

I was brought to tears reading this story. Thank you so much for this link and God is definitely the most high! Take Care and Happy New Year

Meghna

Hi susanno,
Thank you very much! I am happy that you liked the story.

Meghna

Hi Neha,
Thanks for the encouragement. Keep reading!

Meghna

Hi Peter Pie,
You are always a great source of inspiration! Thank you very much!

Meghna

Hi iriegal,
Yes, I agree with you that there needs to be something to believe in the whole world. Thanks.

Meghna

Dear Leena,
Thank you very much for the encouraging words. I'm glad that you liked the story.

Meghna

Hi scorpia,
That was so kind of you. Yes, I agree with you that if you believe in God, He will always be there at times of distress. Thanks!

Anonymous

Hi meghna,
The flow maintained in the story is really appealing. You include proper twists and turns to the story which is unlike of your age. I have only one thing to say, 'SUPERB'.

Hope you win this competition as you really deserve it. Happy new Year, my dear sweet little girl. Keep it up!

JW

The last great story of 2007 before I step into 2008. Thanks for sharing this.

Cheers
JWWM

I am a lover of children's literature

Another great story my dear. If you keep this up, I'm going to have to claim that you my daughter as any parent would be proud to have you as their own, as ! I'm sure your own parents are - after all, who wouldn't be proud to have such a talented daughter?

Just curious, do you have any other siblings that show the same literary gifts as you? My impression is that your family is gifted with a lot of intelligence and talent, because it certainly shows in your writing for such a young person.

Take care and keep writing and we'll all keep reading! :O)

Simon

Happy New Year Meghna!

May you have every joy and success in 2008.

S

Meghna

Hi Catherine,
I'm glad to see you back once again! It's rejuvenating to read your comment. I'm glad you liked the story.
Really wish what you say does come true. I too would love to put that banner on my blog!

Meghna

Hi JWWm,
I'm glad you liked it! Hope you enjoyed reading it. Happy New Year! :D

Meghna

Hi Don,
you are always a loyal motivator. i'm glad my stories please you and you enjoy them! Thanks for all the compliments you've written in your comment!
I have a brother but he isn't much keen upon literature! My father reads books and that's where I got the craze from! :D

Meghna

Hi Ess,
A veryHappy New year to you too! Enjoy this time!

--xh--

nice story - a bit sad, but with a good ending. wish u all teh best with the award, meghz. but, whetehr u get it or not, what matters most is that u write good stories and we enjoy reading them :)

Meghna

Hi ANoop,
Thanks for this wonderful comment. I always smile while reading your comment! You are the best motivator!
Thanks :D

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