Thursday, December 13, 2007

Desire To Soar High!



Oh How I’d love to see the sky

And fly incredibly high


I’d soar like a bird

With wings stretched

And have a wonderful time

Before I go to bed!


I’d love to touch the sun

And see if my fingers burn

Or if the smiling sun

Is really stern?


I want to touch the zenith

And walk on the rainbow

The bright colors of it

Will surely make my life glow


I want to see the castles

Found in the clouds

And I’d love to build one too

Among their lovely crowds


I want to meet the great Lord

Who lives up and above

And ask him to fulfill all my wishes

And spend my life amidst true love!


Oh How I’d love to see the sky

And fly incredibly high!!


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16 comments:

Peter Pie

Hi meghna,
Your imagination soared really very high in this wonderful poem. I am sure that you will one day reach those heights in your life. There is no doubt looking at your talent at this young age. Keep writing!

--xh--

meghz, you are already soaring. there is a english song by R Kelly - ' I believe I can fly' when i need to get myself pumped up, i remember this lines, that i believe I can fly. The soaring eagle is sure something which will boost up the mind. simple nice lines, and a very nice poem. two thumbs up for you, meghz...

★●Shadow Stalker●★

Your imagination is quite good, & the pictures you have painted are really soothing for the reader's eyes.
A typical imagination & dream of a little child, flooded with poetic expressions & artistic touches, this is what sums up the poem. Great!

-Sam.

Anonymous

I am really elated to read this positive poem from you. Once again you have made everyone happy with the post. Keep it up.

Unknown

Meghna, ...
So full of hope ...
It's a GOODie!

Meghna

Dear Peter Pie,
It's good to read your comment once again! I'm happy you liked it!

Meghna

Hi Anoop,
I haven't heard this song just yet but hope to do so soon! Thanks for telling me about it and the compliments!

Meghna

Hi Sam,
I'm rejoicing after reading your comment! Happy that all of you liked it!
Thanks!

Meghna

Hi Nitin,
Glad I could get a thumps up from you! It's really encouraged me!

Meghna

Hi Monsooner,
Thanks for dropping by! I'm glad you liked this small piece of poetry!

Anonymous

Hi Meghna! Great poem and photo! Your mind is amazing! How could you write that? Wonderful poem!
Please, write a book with your poetry and stories! I'm sure you'll be famous if you do that.
Congratulations!

Impressionist

Splendid meghna! :)
really good! :)

Meghna

Hi SStephi,
Thanks for the compliments and the idea. I'll try doing so when I grow a bit older, I suppose!

Meghna

Dear Jeevy,
Thanks for the compliments. Keep reading!

Majik2903

Meghna,
Great poem, I'd becareful about touching the sun though, it's quite hot! You've got some really good imagery in this one! Two thumbs up!

Meghna

Hi Majik,
I too would be a bit careful while doing so, I suppose! Thanks for the compliments and I'll keep posting better ones!

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