The Truth (Part-3)
This is the last and final part of my story. If you have not read Part I and Part II, please click on the links. With sincere desires that you enjoy it...here it goes...
A sense of immense bliss and eagerness filled Maya and she waited breathlessly as a door nearby screeched and a well built handsome man entered, accompanied by an old couple….
Maya watched in surprise as Ryan and her presumed dead, mother and father entered the room with sarcastic smiles on their faces. Maya was mind boggled at the happenings that she couldn’t even demand an answer.
The man at the chair quietly left the small reunion alone as Maya stared at the threesome.
And then Ryan said, “As you are not needed anymore, it’s about time you died too and we inherited your wealth!”
“But…but…you were kidnapped…and mom and dad…you…you…am I dreaming?” she staggered..
Laughing…Ryan explained the whole circumstances to her. “These people you call mom and dad are my real parents and you were adopted. You are the daughter of the King of Crotia, a small kingdom near Soviet Russia. Mom and Dad were the caretakers for the King. After his death and the demolishment of the kingdom, mom and dad fled with you to
Ryan’s dad continued. “But how could we let that happen?? After all, we had cared for you since fifteen long years! We then plotted this plan and as we knew, that no one except your close relatives knew our secret. We then made Ryan marry you and become your successor. After marriage, we kidnapped him and in ransom, we demanded the murder of twenty of your relatives and friends during the King’s period who were supposed to have known the secret…Now that the anonymous caller is dead, Ryan will inherit your money after your death and we will all live happily…”, and the old man’s laughter echoed in the room…
Maya knew not what to say and she had no time too as Ryan took out his revolver and aimed at her..and she stared into his mesmerizing blue eyes……
Wow! My long long story has now ended with the mystery revealed! I would love to know what you think!
47 comments:
tell you what start a writing something bigger.you write beautifully.it is a innate gift,don't waste it :) i loved the story :)
btw the youth unite blog has been updated.
hehehe wat a twist..abhi best ending yehi hona chaiye ki pichhe se king k bodyguards aa jaye black ops ki tarah n unko pakad k jail mein daal de ..kahe rani we r ur secret security :P
bollywood..seriously make it to that.. u will be besster than those who say them best
:P
hehehe
achii story thi..m proud of ya :P
Talk about unpredictable endings. :)
I'm just curious, have you ever tried getting something published?
hey that was a completely unexpected ending..
and i liked it :)
i agree with vishesh... this was amazing... but your destined for so much more... keep up the great work...
Hi Vishesh,
Thanks a lot for the compliments! I'll try something humongous :0 next time!
I certainly will utilize it...
Hi Sourish Bhaiya,
ummm...this is also a good idea! Thanks :P
I would love to try my luck in bollywood...the youngest scriptwriter...he...he..
Hi Steph,
Just tried for that ;)
Nope....never even thought of that at this age! :)
Hi Anand,
Glad you liked it :P
Hi Bubbles,
Thanks a lot...I'll certainly keep it up! No one except God knows what I'm destined for but I hope what you say is true! :P
Whoa, what a twist!It was like reading a James Patterson novel!Absolutely brilliant, Meghna!
BTW, you have recd an award. Check out my latest post!
Hey Meghna. I actually don't know what age you are, but I do know that there's no rule that says you can't be published at a young age. ;)
The reason I asked is because me and a few writer friends of mine have put together an e-zine to help budding writers get published.
You obviously have talent as a writer, so I encourage you to submit something to us, if you're interested.
Our website (still under construction) can be found here: http://theoddvillepress.com/
Hi rampanheart aka ranjani,
It is a pleasure to know that you liked my attempt on mystery. If I could succeed in my try, I'm delighted. Thanks for the complements.
I am also delighted to receive the 'Honest Blogger Award' and feel honored. Thank you very much!
Hi Steph,
Thank you very much for the great complements you have given. I've just turned 13 with no publishing history. But I agree that there is no age limit in this field.
I feel great and honored by your invitation to join the group. I'll surely look into it and let you know soon. Thanks again!
A great ending.... No way I could guess teh plot... Lovely one Meghsss
Hi Meghna, great story! I love your poems and stories! Keep writing!
I've also posted something in the blog,so if you can, visit it!
Bye!
good job..:D
hi..liked all three parts of 'the truth'..to be honest, the truth is you hav got gr8 talent!! :) cheers!!
Hi red phoenix,
Glad to know that you liked the ending of this long story. Thanks :)
Hello stephie,
Thank you. I'll be dropping by soon!!!
Hi filarial,
Thanks :P
Hi Karthik,
Thank you very much for the great complements. I'm delighted to know that you too liked my attempt on a long mystery. Thanks!
Rather than turning point it’s a hairpin turn at end of your story, very enchanting!
More than the story I like ur confident of making it possible. my wishes and applauds :)
WOW!! ONE word...brilliant!!! Fantastic choice of words!
Hi Jeevan,
Thanks for the encouraging words. I try to improve upon each of my post with the real support from friends like you. Thank you!
Hello Nikita,
It's a pleasure to know that you liked it. Thanks...
hmm....to be frank it was good..liked the 3rd part...and i bet u can become a good writer...try journalism!:)
Hi brocasarea,
Glad to know that you liked the story.
Hmm... Journalism? I'll think of that later. Thanks!
woahh....gurl you rock with ya writing! what narration! a superb twist:)
pl delete that comment after u copy the id.
wow..ue blog has undergone a huge chage and it looks really gr8....havent been able to check all this out for quite some time...and gr8 story too...
Hi nightingale,
So, it was great to know that you liked the story. Yes, I got the id. Thank you!
Hi enigma,
Glad that you're back finally :)
Yes, the blog has undergone lots of changes recently and I love to know that people liked it.
Thank you!
Hi m.flower,
It's my pleasure. Happy to learn that you liked the twist in the end of the story.
Hello Meghna!
That story was lovely and sad.
What story! You should publish some day! I was surprised at the ending. But i like it. I LIKE your attitude towards the story. That is dad that she is ADOPTED and that they want her to die so she can join them, and they'll live together on her fortune. I feel sorry for her that she had to die. I never knew it, i though she'd live happily ever after!! But what A TWIST! Good one!!!
And that she died? Unexpected! I agree with Anand. GOLLY!!!
My mind is swirling and whirling with thoughts.
Well written, all i can tell you now, i LOVE your style, ALOT. You impress me, all your stories are wonderful. Maybe you SHOULD publish? I am writing a story of my own, it is called,"Heroes of Magic,". So far it is 47 pages, although i haven't finished yet!!
Following through all those stories, you inspire me to write more ans keep ti going. Thanks for sharing. And even meeting me!!
P.S Bye and stay in touch! Maybe we should write a story together....
Hi meghna
wonderful story...i posted a comment before as well but i dunno where did it go...
i read all the parts and seriously...dey were really interesting
hi Meghna, That was a really touching story Meghna, that ending was really unexpected and that's why I loved it!!
Keep it up!
See ya!
Hi Nadine,
I'm very much delighted to know that the story caught your complete attention and you loved the twist at the end.
Regarding publishing my stories, I think, I've to wait some more and improve upon. Let me think ....
I would love to see the story you're presently developing and hope it comes to light soo. Best of luck!
Hmm... writing a story together. Good idea. let us plan how to do that!
Thank you for the complements.
Hi sahefa,
Glad to know that you too liked this long story. Hope it didn't bore anybody :)
I'm not sure what happened to the previous comment. Maybe that it was not submitted properly.
Thank you!
Hello norma,
Happy to see you here and thank you. It's my pleasure. Keep reading!
I came here to thank you for leaving such a nice post on my blog. I enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the good work.
Kelli
Hi Kelli,
It's really my pleasure. Glad to know that you liked my long...... story. Keep reading. Thank you!
Extremely well written dear! :)
Maya's condition is really pitiful.She split her soul for a person who only cheated her.Sigh!
Hi sameera,
Yes, Maya was cheaten miserably. Poor she!!
Very nicely done. You do have talent. I foresee a future of bestselling novels for you. When you do get published, I'll be one standing in line to buy.
Hi eric,
It is my pleasure. Glad to know that you like this story.
As regard to the novels I may publish, thanks; you'll get my signed copies for free :)
Thank you for the encouraging words.
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