Thursday, May 15, 2008

The Truth (Part-1)

The cars honked beside her as she gracefully wiped the sweat from her brow and swiftly adjusted her hair when her cell phone blared loudly…..

Exasperated Maya received her call. He had been calling for the 12th time since morning but she had kept on avoiding him. However, she knew she could not avoid him now, it was time she learnt what he had to say!

A heavy burly voice with apparent brisk and adroit spoke back, “The boss wants to meet you today in an hour, at our headquarters. Be there or…..”, his voice trailed off and she timorously shut the receiver.

She had been expecting it…what else could she do! She instructed the taxi driver to turn left into a deserted alley. She got down and paid him hastily, letting him keep the change. She then made her way towards a huge bungalow with a sprawling mansion.

She etched the door and heard her footsteps dangerously echo behind her as she made her way to the second floor and entered a dark hallway which led into a small stuffy room high on the smell of cigar.

A man sat on a plush seat with his hat falling low over his face and a long coat adorning his thin yet strong body. He motioned her towards another chair nearby.

After she was seated, he said, “You are needed again. And as the contract said…this will be the 20th and the last murder and if you deny you know how you will find Ryan…….”

Cutting him short she said, “I know! What do I do this time?” she asked reluctantly.

The man smiled derisively and handed her an envelope saying, “The photo and necessary instructions are inside. The job should be done with an hour and you will be escorted back then. Leave immediately!”

She departed hurriedly in no mood whatsoever to see another innocent man who was a father to someone, a husband to another and a son of someone else…another innocent man was going to be killed and she was compelled to do it.

Walking back to the desolate alley way and then on the main street at 45 Welkins road, she saw her old house and of a happy life flooded her…

She remembered the day when she had happily wed Ryan, the love of her life to lead a happy and prosperous life ahead. But her life became devastated after the death of her parents which had been termed as a murder and their bodies had not yet been found. During this difficult phase, Ryan had always been there for her. Consoling and soothing her worried heart at all times..

But life changed a week later. Ryan did not reach back home after work and Maya got worried. At around nine, an anonymous caller addressed her giving her an address and telling her that they had kidnapped Ryan! Maya wept tears of agony and worry for the whole night.

After a sleepless night, she visited the mansion she was supposed to. A man with a black hat held low, stood in front of her. She asked him about Ryan and he told her that she could see Ryan after a month if she completed her assignments. When asked what the assignments were and why she had to do it, he said that she had to kill 20 people without giving any more apparent information.

And after her 19th cold blooded murder….she couldn’t so it! She wanted him back, Ryan! She remembered the happy time - parents…she was tied …no she couldn’t do it…how could she kill another man when she knew what agony the family of such people faced? How could she kill someone?

“How life has changed,” she wondered. Sometime back she could not even kill the little ants but now…now she went around murdering people, “Destiny”, she muttered and armed with a small sharp knife, she walked towards the place mentioned in the elevator……

To Be Continued.......

Here is another attempt at a long story. Hope you all enjoyed this part and next part will be coming soon...


Update

The other successive parts of the story can be read here:

  1. The Truth (Part-2)
  2. The Truth (Part-3)

22 comments:

Vishesh

it was very nice :) am looking forward to the next part :)

Meghna

Hi Vishesh,
Thanks. I am working on the second part of the story.

anand

nice work, generally its men go who around killing people to save their loved ones but you've a different idea.

waining for part 2

Unknown

Nice storyline so far... Waiting for the continuation

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥

tu na ab star TV k serials k liye likhna shuru kar de :P

hehehehe

abhi tak interesting hai ...par mahine bhar mein 20 murder..jyadas nhi hai contract killers k liye bhi :P

par achha tha :P

Meghna

Hi Anand,
This shows that murdering people around is not the forte of men only :P
Thanks. I 'll be coming up with next part today if possible.

Meghna

Hi Phoenix,
Thank you and is a pleasure to know that you liked the story so far. For the next part, you don't have to wait much.

Meghna

Hi Dreamer,
No, I haven't received any contract from a TV serial crew so far for the story :) But may be....
Such things happen in life. Isn't it?
Thank you!

Occasional Brilliance

i wouldnt call you a budding blogger anymore. i think you're quite seasoned!

looking forward to part 2...

--xh--

nice first chapter, and happy to see that you are breaking it to chapters... way to go, sis...

Aravind The Player

very nice ...Waiting for the continuation

Vishesh

meghna would you like to join us here?

Meghna

HI Bubbles,
That's a sweet compliment! I'll posting it today :)

Meghna

Hi Anoop,
Yes, I thought I'll write a long story so did this!
Thanks ;)

Meghna

Hi Aravind,
You'll be reading that soon!

Jeevan

Much sensitive story and was eager to know what the motive behind those murders. dear you make us wonder through your fantasy thinking. All the best :)

Meghna

Hi Jeevan,
he..he..I really love making people wonder :)
I'll be posting the next post soon so be around the corner!

Meghna

Hi Vishesh,
The link provided cannot be accessed but I'd love to know what it is!

Vishesh

ops am extremely sorry....just copy and paste this url....http://youthunite.wordpress.com.....its a new group blog which i have started :)

Meghna

Hi Vishesh,
Just checked the blog. I'm so so glad you asked me in...it's an honor for me!
I'd love to join in :)
But could you please elaborate a bit more on what I'd have to do?

Cine Masala

"Nice post.submit all your posts at www.surfurls.com .Its a social bookmarking site ".
nyn

Meghna

Hi Jack,I'll check what it's about.

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