Let Creativity Flow
Another day, another wish
Black as hell, but nowhere to dish
Can't I ever live as I please?
Doing what I want, and at ease?
Eating wherever I can
Feeding myself from the pan?
Going to every beautiful place around
Having fun and dirtying the ground
Is it necessary I follow all norms?
Just when can I live free from those forms
Killed as I am, I cannot flow
Love and creativity all buried in snow
My eyes can see all that lies beyond
Nevertheless, this society ties me to the ground
Open as the seas and skies
Please can I be like them, where no one cries?
Quit this world and their stupid rules
Rest in peace and act as much as I can like fools
Since long I've been bound in shackles but no more
Today I'll let my creativity flow and not let it deepen inside my core
Until now, I been bound in chains
Very long, I've cried a lot and bore all pains
Well today I'm free
X'mas or not, I'll be meee!
You all see how I let my creativity flow
Zeroed on letting myslef break all norms and be as crazy as I grow!!
Okay......so here's a task for you guys. Go through this poem carefully and then...
.....
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Do you notice soemthing???
Tell me through comments and I'll tell you finally what's special about this poem!!!
41 comments:
A poem I saw,
Budding writer, she wrote itm
Carefully worded,
Deeper Meanings,
Elegantly laid out..
Flattered was I,
Got the meaning when.
I Think I got it right :)
1st letter of all the lines in alphabetical order :-) Nice!!
Who is the poet?
Nice poem, but I'm either too lazy or more likely - too stupid to figure it out!
My stupidity is embarrassing at times!
That was a neat way of laying out the poem. You certainly do let your creativity flow. Nice format, great rhyme scheme, and awesome poem.
Nice poem sissy. U& Vishesh r gr8 are poet and both of u've a bright future. I hope I can also write like this some day.Can't figure it out. Sorry
Your work is really neat & awesome keep it up.
not only did it rhyme - but u lined them in order ;) Bravo meggie!
Who can stop ur creativity tht flows in all quarters - all aroun the world?! :)
ur blog followers are a proof - keep breakin the boundaries kiddo!!!
U IMPRESS ME EVERYTIME...
FST IT IS ALPHABETICALLY LINED AND THEN IT WAS RHYMING AND THEN IT WAS HAVING A THEME...
iMPRESSIVE AND KUDOS TO U....
My intution, heart and all those things inside me want to say that its the obvious...A-Z
But that stupid but reliable hting between my ears, the brain, says that obvious is not the obvious...
So I am puzzled??
Whats on...??
@ Thakkar- LOL!! That's a great reply...I'm flattered too :P
@ Farhad- Righto.....n there are 26 lines, which means all letters in the english alphabets are there..
The author of the blog you are visiting :)
@ Don- LOL!! It's obvious :P
Hope am not embarrassing you :)
@ Shwan- Thanks a lot!! I'm glad you liked it :)
@ Ananya di- Thanks a ton.....Vish is far better though. Of course you can do it, if you give it a try :)
No probs :)
@ Sulo- LOL! Thanks a lot....my blogger followers are actually proof of everything I am ;)
@ Dev- What's with your brain?
Coz the obvious is OBVIOUS :P
@ Sourish bhaiya- You impress me too :)
You catch me everytime :P
Hi Meghna! You amaze me with your creativity. I love poems, i compose too but not as good as this one.
Two thumbs up! I miss you! ;)
@ Iriz- Am so sorry for not visiting :)
hey....you write far better
nice poem....
A-Z..nice revision of my nursery class!!;)
OMG!
Your poem is beautiful!
i really liked it!
you did it yourself?
the letters of the alphabet
i'm so intelligent!
i figured it out!
lol
hope u r OK
kisses
reni
nice poem with a beautiful core theme..and I found out about the inticacies of alphabets etc. from the comments..but nevertheless I am a certified fool :P..keep them coming!!
Wow! I'm really astonished at the creativity in this one.
And the message, hmmmmm!..I personally felt it was the ABC of how even in hard and crippling circumstances, we can smile and "let the creativity flow"..=)
Anyway..its okay if this isn't the precise fact..but I <3 the use of all the lines in alphabetical order,exactly 26 lines, and a beautiful message given!
You said that my current post made you smile right, this one makes me smile even hard. So hard that my face aches! =P
@ Broca- LOL!
Rejuvenated?
@ Renni- LOL! You are certainly very intelligent. After all, whose friend ? ;P ROFL!
Oh yea, am really good. Thanks :)
@ Rahul- LOL! No you aren't..... just that you aren't a good observer :P
But you made it up nevertheless!
@ Aayu- oh! Left me blushing again :) Thanks......and am glad you liked it!
He...he.....we are on a LOL spree, eh?
A to Z, very crisp & clear expression
good Luck for exam results !!
TC
CU
wowwwwwwww beautiful and motivational poem.
and my answer is a combined one of sourish and aayushi. :D
meghz sis how cud i forget u dear. could 1 ever?
its just that me too was away from bloggerland for a long time and thats d reason dear. :)
i hope ur xms went so very well. after all u r a genius. :)
(((meghz)))
hey, megu!!
cool one.. really superb!!
cheers.. keep going!
swetha
@ CU- Thankuuuuu
:) I certainly need luck for my results :)
@ Preeti di- Aw! Wassup with you? Work I guess!
I know you'll never forget
Love ya
Thanks a ton!
@ Swetha- Thanks a lot :)
I wish I could try like this sometime soon. There is no uncertain, creativity means Meghan! Lol. well written dear :)
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@ Harish- I'm glad to read this...only if it isn't a spam!
Wow!Keep the great words flowing! Kudos!
Meghna,
This is not a spam! It is a fact and would like to mail you some thing if I can have your mail address :)
@ Harish- OMG!! Am really sorry. You know, I don't have a word verification. so spams do end up here.....I'm really really sorry
Of course, you can mail me through the contact forum. That goes to my mail. I'll reply back soon
Waiting to hear more...
:P
@ Jeevan- :P Am waiting to see the result :)
@ Rampantheart- Thanks again! Long time, eh?
First thing I notticed: great poem. Then I realized there was something strangly orderly about it. Then a tiny firework show went on in the lightbulb that apeared above my head; alphabetical!
The wording is really nice- that is meg for I am insanely jelous! (my name's Meg-not refering to similarities or anything...)
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